Reviews for lullaby
bahaghari chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
it's disturbing, but i like it. add this in my favorites.
Vesna Kallima chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
awesome...i love what u did with the two separate lines...kind of undertones behind what u are saying...love it!
Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
COOL! this is like that one that i wrote that can be read as one or two different poems!...i sense some deep rooted anger issues here...is there something you're not telling me?
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
o... i luv how u turned this into a lullaby at the end! Made the whole thing sorta sing itself to me. Very interesting & spell binding... almost as if it's too powerful to read or blasfamous. XD Haha.. Luv it!
let me see you smile chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
very nice
123454321 chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Powerful.

That's all I can think to say. Great Poem.

-J.A.