Reviews for Morpheus
Tazwrath chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
You masterfully utilize rhythm and rhyme to convey the complex, haunting imagery your words create. I especially liked the repitition of the last few lines of the first stanza. Well done!

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Mirabella chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Brilliant! Your rhymes are superb and flow so easily. It was a real pleasure to read this. :)
Idee Fixe chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
That poem was exteptionally fluid in its writing and the choice of diction was ideal. I also loved the theme of the poem, and how the narrator evolves through the piece. I especially love the second and last stanza. Great job! :D
Jarlaxe chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
* out of * excellent!
Maggot Blood chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
I find this poem sings to me on many levels and I really liked the line, 'and death makes it harder to die' it was just really really good and I liked it alot. Amazing work.