OMG YAY! Heehee! I get so happy when this gets updated! It's ridiculous but true... lol

And it's all beta-ed really well but I noticed that the middle part of the chap was in present tense but the first and last parts ere in past tense so I'd watch out for that. But everything else was fine as usual!

Top 5... Hmm... That's hard for me because there's so many I like... Too hard to choose...

Can't wait for the next update!

oh my gosh but Michael is a wimp! A really good title for this chap would be "land of confusion". If only people would talk more and assume less they could stop making asses of themselves.

"Happiness didn’t show in Gerald’s eyes, it just seemed to shine from behind the permanent sadness." I really like that...it's sad but pretty at the same time.

Oh... Poor Gerald... D: I find myself thinking that so much while reading this... haha... I think he might just be one of my favorite FP characters, though.

xo

OMG!

i can tell how this story is going to end!

OMG! PLEASE BE A HAPPY ENDING! I WOULD ABSOLUTELY DIE IF IT ISNT!

i love michael and gerald. i think they are the sweetest. and what would this story be if not one of them was a dumbass and was to make things all angsty. but i absolutely love michael/gerald. i think they're relationship (best friends falling in love) is so natural and pure. i hope this ends with them being together.

Hmm...I hate him more now...he's stealing Gerald away from his life and being overly clingy and possesive...it's bothering me inside. Anyway, I'm excited for the next chapter!

You know...I've been reading this entire story...knowing that eventually a relationship with Michael would start...but still hoping that it wouldn't. I don't like Michael. He's an asshole and a complete bitch. Wonderful job writing such a real character that I can hate on a visceral level.

On the other hand, love Sean! And really, despite my complaints, this story is absolutely fantastic, I just need more time to finish the end and I always leave a review when I finish a sitting...

Wow. That was really sad. Poor michael. I actually feel sorry for him now.

OMG dani! Al fin!

Estupido Michael... lo odio, me da pena Ray.

Gerald deberia pensar mas de si mismo... me da cosa q tenga tan poca autoestima y encima el q Michael sea asi con el, tan controlador, creo que le va a hacer peor.

No puedo esperar a q Gee se de cuenta y lo deje.

Extraño saber de Sean! como se siente con la relacion de su hno?

Ah no puedo esperar a ver q es lo q sigue! ya quiero q llegue la parte q estoy esperando jaja

Te quiero muchisimo!

Ah, dammit! More confusion! XD The last half was really different from the first :P I mean the style, and it changed from past to present tense, was that intencional? Gerald needs to explain himself! Hope you update soon!

This chapter is GREAT. I love it. It's sad; it's just unsatisfying enough to get across Gerald's feelings. I'm not sure if that explains it well...but it's brilliant.

Great chapter! I should have known that it was too good to be true, now there'll be more drama... Poor Michael and Gerald, they should try to communicate a little better XD I hope that they can solve this problem after a bit of suffering. Update soon, please! :)

OMG... now it sound so damn sad... well pls update soon... can't wait to see the next one... but I think you're making this way too sad... melancholic... but I guess it's good in it's on way... But hey! I'm not complaining or anything it just seemed so sad... Try to liven' up the next one will ya...

Yay! An update! Gerald no! He like loves you, (or at least he thinks he does *sweatdrop*) so please, don't be like that! And Michael? You are an idiot. Don't let him go, tell him you love him! Ask his what's upsetting him! Don't just let go! Tsk, tsk, tsk *shakes head* I'm disappointed in you Mcihael...very disappointed indeed.

Great chater though, I like how you express Gerald's feelings because it really help people relate to the character and become more attached to the story...well it did me at least XD

Eagerly awaiting next chapter!

Fuck.

I knew something would go wrong. I just knew it.

But you updated! And that's a plus! And I know this story will have a happy ending. Won't it?

Update soon! :)