|Reviews for Shifty Eyes|
| Hed in the Cloudz chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
Ooh, History assignments! I should post some of those! Yup, it's Bethany. Anyways. I like it! Reads like a history assignment, though- it seems like it has too many facts in too little time. I wonder why? And maybe you shouldn't describe the taste of whiskey? (Which IS spelled with an "e" like that, isn't it?) I've never heard whiskey called "sweet", is all.
Nothing much else to say, though. Seeing how I'm sure that you don't actually care if anyone reviews it. And how I've probably pissed you off by now with my assumptions. Now I shall go read Born to Be!
| Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Not bad, not bad! I think I like your other stories better, but this is interesting. Good prologue.