|Reviews for Empathy|
| morphine and lollipops chapter 5 . 1/22/2010
Its chaotic. I love it.
| you're so postmodern chapter 7 . 7/12/2009
I thought this chapter was beautifully written. So abrupt yet you captured the scene and the emotion perfectly. It's so strange, but I love it. ]
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 7 . 4/11/2009
| Mrs. Robinson chapter 7 . 4/10/2009
I love this story. You've got this amazing stream of consciousness thing going on and it really works well for the subject. Keep up the good work!
| Closed Account Sorry Pal chapter 6 . 3/25/2009
This is a pretty good start to writing. This is a level I have yet to reach so, continue writing more chapters, short is better it keeps people waiting for what will happen next. But don't forget to leave a cliffhanger.
| Layla the fiend chapter 5 . 1/21/2009
I support Stacey/Noah.
| you're so postmodern chapter 6 . 1/8/2009
This is really different and creative (I mean you've heard of people reading minds but not like this, not empathetic) and I love your writing style, it's very descriptive and even though Stacey sees in gray, really colorful. The words you've chosen convey a really dark surreal mood. And I like the way it's written in snippets. I want to know more.
I don't know if this is intended, but it's just a little confusing to understand the flow/what's happening sometimes. I had to read back to understand just what exactly was going on with Stacey and Stephen.
Still, keep up the good work and update soon!
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 6 . 1/5/2009
Though they are short, I think that they work. You give just a splash, a taste of your character's before you yank them away. Your readers are left wanting more.
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 4 . 1/5/2009
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
This whole idea is very interesting and you string these little one-liners together that I absolutely adore.
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 2 . 1/5/2009
Very short, but fascinating.
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
Very interesting, you have a great way with words.
| We Used To Wait chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Oh, nice, Intense. I love your writing style. You're a brilliant writer.
| Amindaya chapter 3 . 3/3/2007
| Amindaya chapter 2 . 2/15/2007
I really like this. Are you empathetic?