Reviews for In the City of Bright Lights
MK39 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
I liked it a lot. I loved how it went from happy to sad while still sounding together. Good job!
Aleksy The Flying Onion chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Great poem!

It's sad, but I liked how simple and direct it is. This stanza was really good:

"On the street corner

The delicate has cancer

And will lie in an unnamed tomb"

Nice job!