Reviews for Whore
chrisertastic chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
this is bloody wicked.
she smolders chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
This makes me think of something that happened to me today. In my computer programming class, I took a little break to read some lovely poems on FictionPress, and the girl sitting next to me looks at my screen and says in a distainful voice, "You're reading poetry? Why?". That hurt a lot.

When I read about this girl you describe, she sounds so broken and your descriptions make her feel so real. It hurts me even more sometimes that 'hallowed out eyes' really can make some more alluring and the last line broke my heart. This poem is amazing and the analogy is so beautiful in a sad way. Take care.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I love it.

This is very funny!

And so true.

Lotsa Love

AC
bitterlyysweetchoco chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
hahahahha this is brilliant! I like the message here.

"If I weren't a poet I'd be a whore"

Is that what this poem is about?

Love it. It's a great piece.

(this is the second story of yours on my fave stories list.)
Vira Fern chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
"Your secrets are worth more than your body".

How utterly delicious.

Live, Love, Write.

-

Vira
MarvellousMarvin chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
that's really impressive. its so harsh, and such an interesting idea, and kind of eloquent in its simplicity
L. Cybert chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Wow. That hurt. Thanks.
The Angry Black Woman chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Lovely.
Centaurrius chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
I'm conflicted as to how to tell you how much I enjoyed that in the most eloquent way I can muster, but your poem seems to have stripped me of my large vocabulary. So I'll just say it. I. LOVED. THAT. )