Reviews for Forgiveness
tinkerbell in new york chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
i love this poem. im gonna turn it into a song ok, maybe something sad and slow, with lots of sharps. like the broken girl i see when i read it.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I love this.

I like the title "Forgiveness" its like asking for someone to forgive you for being who you are! But we all tend to want the forgiveness of others even though we shouldn't have to be forgiven for not being perfect.

Trying to be someone else is hard but pulling it off day in, day out, is often so easy, pretending and lying, just to seem perfect in someone's eyes!

There is so much pain in this poem, the pain of not being able to just say 'This is me' and have people love you for that!

Great piece!

Lotsa Love

bitterlyysweetchoco chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I really like this one! I feel the pain in it of trying to be someone else, someone perfect and loved. It's a great poem. The wordchoice was pretty good. I love this one
Aerials05 chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Love this. The longing is so palpable, so real. The last stanza clicks like magic.
L. Cybert chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
The first two lines and the last two lines are the best in this poem.