Reviews for Till Death Do Us Part
blurrylights chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
I loved this. It was short and sweet (in a sad way). That last line was really strong. Great job!
gummybearmurder chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Oh gosh. Wow. Very well written- amazing finish.
Sally Can Wait chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Ack, ohmyfreakingosh that was brilliant. I absolutely loved it. Brilliance, I say.

-Sally Can Wait
prisonerscinema chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
Aw, how sad.. and the last line! Didn't see that coming :( Beautifully written and I agree with Enaidyl: it would have been great as a multi-chaptered story..
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
This has such a strong emotional feeling to it. It's absolutely brilliant. And the ending was so touching, so sad. I like how you put her thoughts between his vows and how you saved the reason for her marrying him until the very last line. Great job!
Distant Dreams chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Kinda sad... but beautiful, nonetheless. Thoiugh I ope to know what happened that she did not marry David?
books4me chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
That last line... a killer line...

CK Shorty chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Wow. Really good. Very sad. Short, but it said enough. Great job on this :o] ...So sad :o[
GeorgyannWayson chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
omg, how sad...


BTW: Twas very good.
Clara Singon chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Oh. Wow.

I didn't expect that. Christine doesn't love him? That's horrible. Too bad this is a one-shot though ... it'll make a great, original multi-chaptered fiction to my way of thinking. ;)

Great job for the suspense and the surprise in the end.
Professional Dreamer chapter 1 . 1/7/2007