I loved this. It was short and sweet (in a sad way). That last line was really strong. Great job!

Oh gosh. Wow. Very well written- amazing finish.

Ack, ohmyfreakingosh that was brilliant. I absolutely loved it. Brilliance, I say.

-Sally Can Wait

Aw, how sad.. and the last line! Didn't see that coming :( Beautifully written and I agree with Enaidyl: it would have been great as a multi-chaptered story..

This has such a strong emotional feeling to it. It's absolutely brilliant. And the ending was so touching, so sad. I like how you put her thoughts between his vows and how you saved the reason for her marrying him until the very last line. Great job!

Kinda sad... but beautiful, nonetheless. Thoiugh I ope to know what happened that she did not marry David?

That last line... a killer line...

Wow.

Wow. Really good. Very sad. Short, but it said enough. Great job on this :o] ...So sad :o[

omg, how sad...

BFQ

BTW: Twas very good.

Oh. Wow.

I didn't expect that. Christine doesn't love him? That's horrible. Too bad this is a one-shot though ... it'll make a great, original multi-chaptered fiction to my way of thinking. ;)

Great job for the suspense and the surprise in the end.

:'(