wow. this is kind of trippy, but very sad. very interesting way of looking at anorexia. thank you for writing this!

this poem is really good, I love your choice of words to describe anorexia.

Wow, this was an interesting delve into the depths of anorexia. I loved the language used, and the description is amazing. It's a very nice poem, and a good start to your no doubt flourishing writing career. Keep posting what you've written up here!

this is sad. kind of strange. i like it. i like it very much. im putting it on my favorites as we speak. i hope you'll start a favorites list soon, i'd like to know who you deem worthy of favorites.