Reviews for Big Bad Wolf |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story, I hope you update it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Guh. I'm sure we all know Sophia's :P I really enjoy your story! One thing though: Werewolf/werewolves not wearwolf/wearwolves! :P I see you haven't updated in a while, but hopefully you will real soon (: I really love how you describe 'the pull' Lana feels- hopefully we'll see even more of Lucan's reactions to it soon...heh ;) Damn, I kinda liked Oliver XD I like that he listens though, 'cause barely anyone there seems to spare even a second for Lana. She's just been ~taken and doesn't even ~know what's going on. So not fair. I wonder what is going to happen next! Hopefully Lana will find her ~place in the pack more, and Lucan will be more...~present. Oh, I think if you had a more detailed summary you would draw in even more people; something with the words 'werewolf', 'vampire', 'mate', 'kidnap', 'war' would be preferable as then it would come up in the search results for the correct audience looking for a specific type of fic (: This kind of fic has a large audience~ so don't abandon this story! It brings us joy :P Anyways, Update real soon! MOARNAO plzkthnxbai |
![]() ![]() so shes been kidnapped and been told that her father is dead and is acting like that ...i hate you, your writing, and your characters. i hope you die. |
![]() ![]() your dialouge is horrible |
![]() ![]() i think your character is an idiot, with idiot thoughts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does she have to be dizzy. she does have a good heart. i think Tiffany should be Ethan mate. time for another update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I love this story so far. I'm abit confused as to why Jayce abducted Lana and then simply...gave?..her back to Lucan. But other than that I adore this. I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey - I stumbled on your story - it's cute, funny, she's so ditzy! Hope you keep updating |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no :( Poor Lana :(( ~Mo~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hooray! More! I'm glad that Lana has a friend now, and that it's not causing issues for her. Write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHA, I HATE KOCOUM. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol hat was an interestin chapter almost forgo about tis story anywaz at least she has a fiend now lol and I love t disney movie part! updat soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() she' going to get a job? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I love this story! I wish I had a guy like Lucan! So jealous! Update soon pretty please... with a cherry on top! Haha thanks. D I think Tiff should get with Aiden... just a though since they are both so flirty. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sophia sounds nice, but i hope she is not evil! was glad u updated i like this story :) cannot wait for the next chapter |