|Reviews for Aeon|
| Megabyte chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
Good story. Is linearly a word? I do the same thing, so I don't mind.
Do you think it matters if you have short chapters? Have you EVER read Dan Brown's books? Or Life of Pi? Those books are all bestsellers, and they all have incredibly short chapters. In life of pi, one chapter is two words long. It doesn't matter how long your chapters are, don't worry.
Well, I like your story. It has a nice, intreguing plot, and a bunch of hooks to capture your reader's attention. Nice going.
However, in the first part, you say the character's names too much. Since you have two members of the opposite sex, you can say "she" and "he" with no confusion to the readers. But that's my only complaint. No spelling errors even :D
| Counting Petals chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
I like where you ended it, it was a nice hook. And it's a good way to get people asking questions. What are these higher stakes? Anyway, I hope you update soon!
| morrigaine chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
An interesting start but it feels a little short. It opens up a lot of questions. I hope we'll get some answers soon :)