pointless porn.

i just sorta wasted my time.

i hate the teacher, he's lecherous and inconsiderate.

this is an interesting read. I didnt expect it to have a plot at first but hey it's good, you did a great job with this story.

I read this a long time ago, but I recently remembered it, and found it again to reread xD

I just want to say I loved it. It did strike me as funny that a storyline came up, but that's what I love-and something people can relate to ykno?

And actually, after rereading, I realize I really liked Rick, until the strange sex scene with him (not sure why I find that scene so strange haha maybe from the fact that it made me wince-in pain). But that was the typical best-friend-in-love story, wasn't it? I don't know how I never noticed it before-maybe because it was slipped in so low-key, the way Liyla simply may not have really..connected with it herself? I don't know, but I found that really cool.

And I think you being an Anthony-fan persuaded ME to be one :/ In fact, if you still have that second-half of chapter 18 (I think?), I'd like to read it :] if you're still ok with sharing it.

But yep! Mostly I was compelled by my newfound fascination/appreciation of Rick to review haha. Props on the story!/exercise in.. sex, I guess lol.

Aw, shit, I also forgot to say that it's sad, what happened to Rick. Rick didn't deserve it!

And I like how you put not as much interaction with Lucas and Liyla as it would be in a normal story. The people they are kind of suit this situation. Liyla doesn't talk much, and Lucas doesn't really like to talk much. They just. . . Like each other. I guess that was frickin kewl.

You're probably not on this account anymore (huh...), but I feel the need to least something of me on here with this story. I loved it and it's going in my favourites. I can't express how sickened, delighted, entertained, awed, and saddened I feel when I think about this story. You wrote something so different, and included incest in all of it! My favourite was Anthony as well, but Lucas and Liyla really do work well together. The brother and sister relationship is so sweet and depressing, it makes me want to cry.

I loved the climax. It was amazing and so close to the end.

Wow... I mean... I just... wow.

Wow, that was quite the story. It would have been nice to see her interact more with Lucas, though. He seemed like a pretty deep guy.

ahh! Can you make them somehow UN-brother and sister. I want this couple to last. PLEASE? You're killing me! I love them together. can you do more girl/girl too? I think the plot could go deeper with her friends. I don't read alot of smut but I think that this story is really good. Usually, I'd lose interest or be turned off but...KEEP WRITING! (:

Hmm... for the longest time, I was rooting for Rick. XD I always liked Lucus, from the beginning, but I always ended up rooting for Rick. I'm a sucker for a good muscian... then he turned out all bleh when he had the chance! Man! I just wanted to ... KICK HIM!

Anyway... pretty good. I enjoyed reading this story. .~

Fuck-ing Hot. Seriously. I wish I could write a longer review, but I need to ... yeah... work off some of that tension.

wow! is all abou the only thing i can think of. i loved it. not just because of the sex it features. but the romance formed amongst each character. The fact that Lucas was this well formed violent character, and yet he was the one Liyla felt most content with. i couldnt wuite understand why christie and shawna were so involved... did they end up being lesbian? or did they like like the girl on girl action for entertainment... i thought at one stage they were just best mates... nothing further... but they developed an intimate relationship, if you can call it that. i think my favourite character was Lucas. he was a hard guy but soft on the inside. and gee didnt Cactus turn out to be a bit of a schitzo! i thought he was the nice guy, so it turns out he's the sexed up pervert.

nah i really liked the whole story and the fact that you said it had no immediate plaot. it was just wonderful.. its like you could find some sort of relation to each and every character.

i cant wait to read Sand Ghost. sounds exciting :D

anyway, if you could get back to me on the girls' situatuion that would be cool.

once3 again, great story. loved every minute reading it!

thanks

jackie

I do think that it's nice you're exploring the realm of erotic romanticism instead of the opposite but I do like this story. It is told through the eyes of a teenager, and they're more prone to find a thrill in dirty words.

simple review.

i love Lucas.

pretty good :)

Great story; good work; not my the expected ending but still good, _; keep up the good work.