Reviews for break |
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![]() ![]() ![]() (First of all, love your penname.) I like the cynical humor in this. Good formatting, holds the anger well. "I like to break things in such a way that they fucking stay broken." There's a lot of power to this. Short and... swift comes to mind. A deadly little smile would go well with this. Favs. It's got a strong voice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful peice. The second and third lines have very good imagery. Katrinaxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and powerfull, this captures a shitload of emotions and throws them into the reader's face - in a good way. This is a very nice piece. The subject matter is very real, and something that most people will deal with in their life. The use of italics, bold and suchforth is nice. I enjoyed it greatly! |