Heart rending

That was such a touching story! I always want to hear what happens next in stories, but I'm really glad how you did everything. Thanks so much!

Its great...amazing...awesome...stunning.
loved it so much.

Absolutely heart-rending story! There aren't many stories out there that focus on the deeper aspect of love and not the superficial looks (despite the fact that is addressed here)! Amazing!

This was a beautiful story. I loved it and it was very well written. My only suggestion would be to make the dialogue between the characters smoother.

I actually thought Alice wasn't going to fess up at first. The last part made me cry (yet again...).

Oh, my, GOD! This was so beautiful it made me cry x.x I thought of my girlfriend and what would happen if I left her like that so it really got to me. I started crying and was almost afraid you'd leave the end as a tragedy. She got closure, the end! But no, you gave her the love of her life back and I couldn't ask for more 3 Thank you.

Beautiful story. Truly heartbreaking and breathtaking. Just to let you know I broke down in sobs. Thanks for sharing this one shot with your readers. You did an excellent job.

wow...i actaully think i cried at the end bit...i loved the whole story from beginning to end

keep up the gd work...:Dxx

Such a well written story.

I was hooked from begining to end.

I could learn a thing or two from you.

Beautiful.

a truly beautiful story 3 I loved it very much!

:O OMGLJ! That was so friggin AMAZING! :O Im Just... :O Im Friggin Speechless ! :O

So many very well dones1 :D :O :)

D: i hate you... you made me cry! DX but i loved it. a part of me expected lucy to be alive, but the chances kept going down as i read... _ god i hate crying...

I actually read this yesterday, and it's been swimming around in my head ever since. I LOVE this story! It's amazing! Great job!