Reviews for Thank You
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
wow, this is where it ends. loved that line. and your way of describing suicide is really strange, but it's vivid(i imagined every single thing in the poem, it was like you took my hand and showed me all of the places or i was with you so it's really good).

there's a sort of mistake here:

"Ignore what everyone said". it could be: "ignore what everyone says" but said is true, so you just need to add 'had' before 'said' and it would sound right (cuz something was nagging me when i read it)

but overall, i realy loved this. faved
Cross Rose chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
I liked the last line, "But this is where it ends"

It ended it all :]


Cross Rose
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
I hope this isn't a suicide not :D But well odne, I like it. Thanks for reviewing.