|Reviews for When You Go, I'll Forget All About You|
| Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Oh my god. I never saw that cominh. Its sad how they parted.
| KnittingKneedle chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Hi I'm reviewing with the review marathon (link on my profile!)
Aww very sad piece, nice and moving too!
Abby seems very noble, I like that they have this unspecified back-story about them; Lukas not running away from his problems and Abby’s lack of parents.
I like the cold imagery you have, it’s like the way that Abby wants to feel towards Lukas and also the way that she feels about her situation. Even though she was really very terribly silly
As far as plot goes, well it’s been done before- the whole lover hurting the person they love to help them, but the descriptions you used were enough to make me look past them a realism and the interesting metaphors kept me reading and I can honestly say that I didn’t see the illness coming for a while.
| pebbles-05 chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
wow. this is amazing. Its really clever and heartfelt. well done!