Reviews for Dive into the Fissure
Kapoo chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
It's the tower of song, ever heard that song? Leonard cohen. he's sweet
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
Wow, this is really neat! This is my favorite part:

"A fissure in the minds

Of sinister and luminous

Into something you can’t touch

Just a feeling"

Great imagery, nice flow, and just an overall good poem.