|Reviews for Dive into the Fissure|
| Kapoo chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
It's the tower of song, ever heard that song? Leonard cohen. he's sweet
| ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
Wow, this is really neat! This is my favorite part:
"A fissure in the minds
Of sinister and luminous
Into something you can’t touch
Just a feeling"
Great imagery, nice flow, and just an overall good poem.