Reviews for Bitter Rain
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I like the second stanza's personification... I also like the repition of clueless... I love the ending as well... great piece
Ice and Snow chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
i'm honored. and that is saying it dryly. You seem to be getting repetitive. But who am i to talk? sigh You seem to convey similar messages using subtly different words (but hey...i do that too...but whatever. i'll be a hypocrite) More color; context