Reviews for I'm Lost Without You
ten pts above average chapter 1 . 3/22/2007
aw :] this gives a happy yet sad feeling..I used to feel this way about someone..I miss that feeling..good job! ps-thx for the review! I hope you review more! Ill be sure to return the favor!
BrightSideGreen chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
Ha, wow. I am thoroughly impressed. :)

A feeling that everyone feels at one point,

and you write something that hits it dead on,

which is something that a lot of people (or maybe just me?) really cannot do. .

This poem is awesome. ) It was like having someone take a stethoscope and tell me what my heart is saying, as corny as that sounds. xD
notated descant chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
classic feeling... love sucks. But if I were you, this topic has been done so many times before. What's great about that is if you can twist it into an original form, it's breathtaking. Just a thought! (thanks for the review!) Keep on writing!
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
That was a nice poem.

All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
This is really sweet. _