ooh, i love it! And awesome, you'd really sign it for me? I'll have you the editing back on friday at the latest. terrific job with the chapter; and the next, actually, because i'm using this to reply to both.

that was...absolutely delicious. seriously awe-inspiring, make me want to drool good. and their argument in the beginning was FUNNY. is that odd that i find it funny? was i not supposed to? And I must say, luke is one of my favorite characters. terrific job with him...:D

dreamerdoll

*wonders what a Zotz is*

Yeah...I'm to young to read that. ...But I did skim over it. Another great chapter. Do I say that in all my reviews of this? Cause I think I do...They all are great though.

Keep writing.

~Opal

Lawl... I like this story :)

I haven't been of forever and noticed that your Cri De Coeur is going to be PUBLISHED? OMGZ OMGZ OMGZ ah! MUST GET ONE!

Anyways, on to this story, I think that it has a great plot and all, but this scene made me think of Luke's dad for some reason. Heh... not to be mean, but it was scary... because it just flashed in my head and I was like "woah".

Good story, and UPDATE cri de coeur(encore) pls! and this too of course! BUT I WANT TO READ MORE OF YOUR amazing work :)

Shindo

Nyu~

OMG! How could it suck? Well..it could but not in the way you're thinking. BUT IT WAS OMGWTF WORTHY. It was hot and amazing and yeah. Amazing. Really. And WTF? ZOTS? Where'd you get Zots? Ahh. I miss Zots. I think I rememeber hearing about a site here you can buy Zots but I dunno. I could be wrong. You know what I also miss? Candy Cigarettes. Omg. I loved those.

LOL! OH MY GOD! ARE YOU SERIOUS? SHE SAID ALL OF THAT? OMG! That's like...the best thing I've ever heard. LMFAO. The fag-wave. Classic. I gotta teach that to my little brother. He's 6 and friendless. LOL. But seriously. I love her if she said that. That's amazing. God. Another amazing and lovely oh so lovely thing...

“Oh really, Dr. Phil? And how the fuck would you have handled it?”

“I would have told him he was right, pulled him into a passionate kiss, taken him into the bedroom, and fucked him black and blue.”

“I’m so glad you’re not a gay man. You feed the stereotypes.”

“Hey, they’ve gotta eat, too.”

“They’re getting fucking obese these days.”

LOL! .line was hilarious. That is amazing. You're amazing, my friend, amazing. Seriously, it was like funny. And thank you for the long reply. You make me feel all naughty. Like I should spread my legs for your enter button.

A good chapter! I don't have much to say so I just wanted to tell you it was good!

Utterly woot. Nah both this chapter and the previous were great. Update soon!

sweetie! i'm not gone sorry! i'll explain EVERYTHING. But now i want to tell you how hott this chap is and how broken i think lorren will be next chapter..or completely in bliss. I wanna a luke hahahhaa

OMG! Finally, finally, FINALLY!_~ They did it! And the rib job scene didn't suck!_~ Not at all! Feel sorry for Luke when we got a glimpse of his father raping him... Poor man... But I'm still über happy for him and Lorren!_~

I guess I'm too young.. ? D: Ah well, I read it anyway. Can't miss a single chapter! Woo. That was a good chapter indeed. Hooray no more half-assing things. Now Luke has shown his love for Lorren. And he better keep showing it too. Or Imma 'beat him up.' Haha..

Again wow, nine months. My friend had told me about this website, I went to it, I found your story, I read it. And I haven't read anyone else's stories on here. o.o I was teh twelfth reviwer? :O Neat, I have been with j00 the whole way. Yay. That just goes to show how much I love your stories haha. They rawk my socks. -Dances.- Aw, don' cry, Luci! -Patpat.- Mebe j00 are just really happy? O.o Iono. Now off I go to do a project.. T.T

heehee I loved this and just so ya know, your scenes do suck

haha! they don't suck in the literal way, but I will let you think about what I just said. hehee

Woah...That ending was, like...deep. Or something. I can't find the right word. Stupid words...

Another awsome chapter.

Keep writing, pretty pretty please!

~Opal

oh loved it! especially the ending! update soon!

Thank you for telling me.:) And go Lorren. I think Luke needed to hear that and I like the whole paper idea, very awesome and orginial. Good story!:)

rawr! whata good ending. SO how's it going? i'm slowly becomiong stable again heheh ;; but yes i totallu adore luke