GAH, the school has been blocking chapters again... This one and the next one, but I got into the last one... But where's the point? Well, now I'm at the library and can finally read! Three chapters to read, too!_~ I loved this chapter! I wonder what will happen in the next one, so I'm just gonna go straight over to that one!_

Love the visual molestation, and love this story, tis brilliant, and have yet to read Passion but i'm sure my yaoi collection will make it that far :P update soon!

“Every time my mom would say, it’s time for your siesta, I always wished that she would say, it’s time for your… fiesta!”

Oh yes, the witty banter of a retarded orange sock puppet with a lisp and a vocabulary limited enough to rival mine. Fun fucking times, I tell you.

LOL! LOL! OMIGAWD. Oreo cookie came out of my mouth at that line. Oh yes. I'd buy my book just for those parts too. Those two paragraphs or whatever were just like random stuff that randomnly came out at a random moment. Really, though? Cafe Press publishes anyone? Even if you type like a 7-year-old on crack and your story is about a serial killer clown that drowns people in his flower that squirts water? If so then DAMN. Cafe Press just climbed the rawkage-o-meter. I feel your pain, though. The amount of my friends that would actually read slash are like...four or three. The rest are homophobic or too catholickass or lazy. Although, my three brothers-in-dildos will tear it apart so I shall buy as soon as you get published! But since art and I go together like ketchup and peanut butter I can't help you with that. I'd just take a random picture or draw stick people. Lmfao. Stick people. Omg. I'm sorry! My long review had practically nothing about your story. I suck...cheetos.

CONGRATS FOR TEH BOOK! what kind of book is it? and how did it get published! Um i will see if i can do soemthing for your contest1! XD

Well tehse last two chaps were retty much sexy! want to read more! and wtf with that teacher *grols*

Wow. Found out all ready? "But I draw the line at having sex in school." I love that. But then again, I love it all!

okay, i went through this whole little thing, but for some reason it got...exited, or something, which totally depresses me!

But anyway: I seriously get to edit it? *squeals* so freaking awesome! I'm excited now...if you need it, my email is My backup is But yeah...super excited.

And actually, I would prefer to buy it, as it gives it the...oh, i don't know, feeling that it's actually REAL. Besides, this will be the first thing i buy with my first ever paycheck; how awesome is that? I'm excited. Hey, but if i send it to you, would you sign it for me? because that would totally be awesome!

Anyway, this chapter...was awesome! I hate that teacher! the "bestest" thing made me laugh, however, because my best friend says i'm her "breastest" friend, and it just brings back hilarious memories. But that is seriously what she printed on my christmas card. weird, right? anyway...you now have a super-excited, super-hyper person on your hands (i get weird when i'm tired, and my coach is a slave driver who totally wore me out), to which i apologize for! But i'm just so...freaking excited! This is so awesome! :D

terrific job with the chapter!

Good chapter!Yay your getting published i can die from my exitment for you, not literally but you get the idea!

I like this chapter. Haha. Congratz for getting published! I would buy the book if I wasn't like, broke. o.o' Yeah. Anyways, love it!

Well now. That was fucking hot. You totally inspired me to write a masturbation scene. Well, not really cause I was gonna do it anyways but yeah. You MOTIVATED me. Yep, yep. God, you update fast. I'm here like...reading stories and drinking root beer and you're over there updating before class. BUT OMIGAWD OMIGAWD! YOU'RE GETTING PUBLISHED! WOO! I have to buy it! Please tell me it's slash. PLEASE! Or else I'll like die or something OR OR THE BIGGEST PUNISHMENT OF ALL! I shall buy it and then scan it and share it with the lovely people of limewire...

I'M KIDDING! KIDDING! Lmfao. But yeah. How did YOU get published anyways? Wait...that sounded mean but uhh..yeah. You get the idea. The gist. The dang diddly ska doodle. I'll stop now. Luverly chaptah, dearie! Can't wait for the next! But you're probably like writing it all ready so yeah. Damnit.

I...must...go...write...!

Woo! Hot chapter~!

well, i liked it, if that counts :] haha. i like luke in this chapter. it's like, he could... but he doesn't... and that means a lot. i can see lorren getting upset that they didn't fuck, though. i don't know. haha. that doesn't make a lot of sense, but i don't really know how to explain what i mean... ANYWAY... WOOHOO! :D you're being published? jez, that's awesome!

Great chapter.

You're going to tell us the name of the book and all so we can read it, right?

Congrats on getting published!

~Opal

THAT IS SO COOL! *Squeals* Congratulations! When/what/who/how did it happen? (we must cover all bases!) I'm so excited for you!

:D

Oh, I'll beta for you if you want! I do it all the time for people on line, at school, and even my older sister and mom, so I'm pretty good at it! Is it a slash story that's getting published? I hope so! I'll buy one! Or two or three, because I have to send them to everyone and say "I KNOW her! I talk to her through long and detailed reviews CONSTANTLY!" LOL.

Congratulations...

awesome chapter, by the way. fucking awesome!

The chapter was great, don't worry :] Oh my God congrats on getting published. I'll order it over amazon (:

I like how you just do the small little snippets of their past. It's completely random but in a good way.

My brother's trying to convince me to let him read some of my stuff. I made the mistake of printing out a hard copy of a chapter and ever since he saw me looking over it he's been nagging at me.