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   dreamerdoll chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 Yeah, I know, how bizarre is that? I think its one of the most beautiful things ever...Yeah, it is rather spiky, but still awesome. Wow, that really sucks that you have to travel so far just to attend church. anyway, i loved this...Lorren is so awesome, being able to speak spanish at opportune times. this chapter was muy delicioso! Can't wait to read more... Tori Ps: sorry for not reviewing before, I was away. Now, i must go check out your other version of this story! |
| Midnights Scream chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 LOL *cheesy grin* tres bien. haha I put french in my reivew! :) Oh yeah and that was teasing. I don't understand why Lorren is a little scared. Is it because he's a virgin? Some ugly past memory? I go with the first, but who knows. Evil Viper getting in the way of a . |
| Naked Penguin Fetus For Pope chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 LOL. I love how you plugged my story with all your heavenly sneakiness. That rawk'd. Almost as much as you do. But no because you rawk 10 million times more. I should dedicate a chapter or somethin' to you since you got me 100 reviews. And I shall! I have just the chapter in mind... Anyways, YAY! Teasers. Hawt. Luke is the original cuddly Pedo Bear. Oh! Oh! You thought of that too? Wow. I guess it's because we're both so equally sick in the head and die-hard smut bandits that we think alike. Lmfao. Yeah. That sounds about right. Omg. Smut bandits? I amaze myself with my own awesomeness. |
| Opal Rose chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 No! Why did you end it here? Please update soon or I'll go crazy! Many thanks. ~Opal |
| gayface chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 Yay! Slashy-goodness. Good job punching the guy ] |
| WitchGhost chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 Good chapter! I can't belive someone would ever hit a dog like that in real life, that would be sad. |
| Sunshine Knight chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 Gr... ppl and cliffy's. anyways, love the story just haven't gotten around to reviewing. Love teh chappy and so help me if you don't continue this little teaser. Anyways, love the fic and the chappy. update asap Chrys |
| afk chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 no you're going to drag this years T_T mine lorren will not have thy sex hahaahah, oh well part of the story charm (i have been stuck for um more tan 10 chap for mine to have sex lol) so yup, sorry for no updates in our story, i'm just in a very time-wasting crisis... will tell you later XD |
| dolly-dear chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 Evil. Yup. Very very evil. I love it though. I also like the little stories about their lives, it gives some more info on the character. Update? |
| NekoRinChan chapter 13 . 1/22/2007 -Squeals!- Omgomgomgomg! :O Teh ebil cliffhangerness of DOM. -Spazzes.- Now that is TWO cliffhangers that I am dealing with at the moment. This story, and Tramps Like Us(manga). -Rolls around like the spazz she is.- I wanna know what's gonna happen! Next chappy next chappy! . Ok I need to breaathe. Hoo.. ok. Poor Luke! His ebil daddeh! D Rawr!And and and and and! That was sweet when Luke said that Lorren was beautiful. And I am glad that you were flattered by my spazziness. I shall probably be that way again tomorrow. And she doesn't wanna be your friend cause you don't have similar writing styles anymore... ? Oo That.. makes no sense what so ever. Hm.. well, can't wait for teh next chappy. -Rolls away all spazzy like.- |
| NekoRinChan chapter 12 . 1/22/2007 Aw... Pootsie. T.T And haha at what Lorren did. That was.. so.. BOLD. o.O Like, whoa! That was completely unexpected. And aw.. they were holding hands~. How swet. :3 We! |
| Kizuna chapter 12 . 1/22/2007 Great chapter! Luke saved him!_~ So sweet! But his journal... Did he get it or is it lost forever? Haha, when he kissed that man... That was just hilarious!_~ |
| Naked Penguin Fetus For Pope chapter 12 . 1/21/2007 WOO! You only replied to me. That makes me feel so special. Omigawd this is weird after I just saw The Hitcher. I got all that hitching sexiness stuck in my brain. Fuck. Gotta get it out. Omg. I thought that he was going to fall and Luke would get all heroic and lay ontop of him and shield him from the train and the train would leave and they would be okay and then Luke wouldn't get off and he would be all hard and Lorren would be all flattered and offended. Yes, that sounds about right. But awesum chappy. I'm listening to Clocks just because you said that you were and then you changed it so...Tom Waits it is. |
| gayface chapter 12 . 1/21/2007 Ohmygosh this chapter made me so sad ;-; I get all emo about animal deaths, even in stories and on tv. The fox that was killed at the start of harrypotter 6 made me cry [ but I'mma pussy so eh. |
| bR0k3N chapter 12 . 1/21/2007 This was a funny/sad chapter. poor dog, but funny incident with the one rude dude. |