Wow. This is really good.

Luke actually kissed Lorren. That was awsome.

Update again soon!

~Opal

Poor Lorren and I like Luke you made him a good . :). Does that mean he's staying with Luke since Jesse is gone? HM so interesting. I shall be waiting for the next chapter! :)

I'm gonna threaten you right now just because. Omigawd if you don't update like tommorrow Imma like...kidnap you and then uh...not send a ransom note and then kill you. Yeah. That's what's gonna happen. Anyways, fuck fuck fuck. I love Luke and Lorren. They're hilarious seperately so when they get together it's like a cosmic explosion of infinite and eternal laughter. Yes. Shakespeare's got nothin' on me, hunny. Nothin' at all.

LOL! Your Dad wants to read your slash. Omg. That's scary. I would freak if that happened to me. Nah. I'd lie. I come up with good lies when I'm a rabbit in your headlights. Good Radiohead song. I should change the Clocks song to that. Anyways, on a more serious note...

YAY! Pedos. Yum. _

WELL, it's just 9 months. If he doesn't want to be a wittle pedo then he can wait a few months, right? Right? Who am I kidding. I'd rape Lorren upon sight. But it wouldn't be rape because I'd be a really hawt gay man with double the tent if you know what I mean. The twin blades. Dos pistoles. Whatever that means.

I don't live in Canada but I heard somewhere that the age of consent is like 14. I spat my milkshake out at that. It was vanilla too. Naughty, I know. I could be wrong though. About the age of consent not the naughtiness.

Fuck. I love your stories so fucking much. Fuck fuck fuck. I didn't even plan on reading one chapter let alone seven. Damnit. Oh well. I don't think I've read so many stories of one person so much. Unless they're like Chuck Palahniuk or Anne Rice or Christopher Rice. OMG THE CLOCKS SONG! I almost typed cock song. Teehee. Sorry. Lame.

For a while I worried about Cole saying fuck so much. But I can't help it. Cause I don't say fuck a lot but I think it a lot. So, when I'm writing it just comes out. But no one mentioned it so yeah. Fucking Clocks song keeps fucking playing.

Woo. Hot twist. I hope they have sex on the desks and stuff. It seems that I always read your stories at 2 a.m. I think it's because I have absolutely nothing to do around this time. Except get drunk and smoke which I can do any time. So yeah. 2 a.m. is my personal time with Luci. Lmfao.

I love Luke. He's hilarious. Really. I don't know what else to say. I suppose I could keep talking about the Clocks song that's STILL playing. I should get that Coldplay song that I had stuck in my head. But I hate coldplay so no.

Lmfao. Love the ending. Reminds me of me and Espanol. I should really pay attention in Espanola classe, though. Because most everyone I know is Mexican or Azn. I should just learn Chinese. OMG THE CLOCKS SONG! IT'S HAUNTING ME! I'm too lazy to open up winamp. So fuck that.

Lmfao. OMG! Why am I laughing? Those are pedophiles. Wow. I'm still listening to the Clock song. Is it on repeat? Oh God. I remember when I was obsessed with Suikoden. I never did beat the last boss. Hmm. Oh well. It was too hard. He kept changing colors and killing that fucking idiot that I put BY ACCIDENT in my group. Ahh. Finally. A good song. Sweet, sweet Nirvana.

LOL. Love this story. Even though I don't feel like reading at all. I'm sleepy but Imma read some more. Fuck. Why am I listening to Coldplay? Goddamn this song. Fucking Clocks.

cool chapter I loved it! heehee it was funny. that whole bubonic fag stuff!

hahaha. sorry. i really haven't even started the new chappie.. :x i should, yeah. i'll work on it (if not today, tomorrow or sunday). i promise! up by... maybe tuesday, if i find any inspiration.

and that whole, biology gay rant thing. yeah, that exact same situation happened to my friend taylor. except when he was ranting, she intterupted and was like, "I FUCKING HOPE YOUR KIDS ARE GAY!" and he was like, "i'd kill them." she started crying. :[