The whole, "fuck" thing seems normal to me. o.o I use it a lot at times. Probably too much.. oh well. That was a good chapter. Hooray for all the green and black that Luke had going on~. Oh man, I love Lorren so much. o_o; ~_o Wow.. I think that was my longest review EVAR! :O

Luvs to teh Luci~!

Umigawd that chapter made mr laugh so much! xD The thing with the hair dye bottle was so funneh! And the penis-fly-trap. And and and, the part with the cornflakes. And and and... yeah. O_O;; Heh, like I said, funneh chapter. Man, am I hyped yp on something or what? _ Meh, ok, well, off I go to read the next chapter~

Luke's definately a topper. haha!

Wow, you've moved aroound a lot...I'm kind of jealous! My dad was in the military for like eleven years, but the only other place I've lived was Okinawa, Japan. Otherwise, its been ALL arizona *POUTS*. Virginia though...very awesome. I'd love to live there. Hehe...random people are the best, because you never know what they are going to say. Obviously, because they are random! :D Anyway, terrific job with the chapter...I loved the necrophiliac thing, it had me giggling insanely. And Luke sounds extremely sexy. :D Can't wait to read the next portion!

dreamerdoll

PS: Did I tell you yet how much I love your salutation thingie? (not sure what you call it...:D)

interesting chapter, the journal is an interesting idea, i either missed that or it wasn't mentioned. idk. generally speaking older people have more experiance so they top, idk, just what i've read, but even if your not top you can still be enthusiastic, or agressive.

Another good chapter! Necrophilia always has the power to gross me out(eww).

i *so totally* agree with lorren, man with suits...oh my gosh! but how the hell did he get that journal?

Okay, thanks for clearing it up. Where I live all the schools generally have a name and a number with things like PS (Public School) and JHS or IS (Junior High School, Intermediate School) tacked on. I learned the Spanish alphabet with those three letters too.

I am glad you are treating the whole underage issue with so much humor. Most stories disintegrate into "OH NO I AM A PEDOPHILE" angst.

I would never ever take my journal (if I kept one at least) to school because I would probably leave it behind in each and every one of my classes.

I leave such long, useless reviews just to say I really liked the chapter. I rarely have something constructive to say [

What does LAIK stand for or is it an actual word? As for top and bottom, I really don't see either as fitting into those roles. It could be an equal opportunity relationship xP

Haha, I see Lorren as bottom all the way. Somethings about his personality might say otherwise, but I still think he'd be bottom.

Hello, I decided to review, and say I like the story! I know so useless. Now the story makes me glad I don't have to take a train.

haha. wow. That really sucks for him to be a teacher.. and by him, I mean

yeah.?

-DBD

I remember chanting the Spanish alphabet in junior high school. Thankfully I take Latin now so I rarely have to do anything besides translate.

Penis-fly-trap. Oh my god. That was hilarious.

Woah, I wasn't expecting this. I thought Luke was a college drop out or something but how old is this man? I got thrown by the P.S. 143 because P.S. for me stands for public school, grades k-6.

Oh wow, I stay like five feet away from babies on the train if they are the sticky, yowling type. I have heard this horror story about this (grown) man who just sits down on the train and basically uh defecates. I felt really sorry for my friend who was sitting next to him.

And you updated so quickly. Great work ethic. D

Hah I don't have a job, no 'we' as in my country. I was talking about 'our' McDonalds. I might work in a cattery next school holidays, volenteer but I do love to clean up shit.

"...the cute little Asian girl who was probably smiling all sexy because she’s fucking Asian and probably has natural black hair and so has probably never used fucking dye in her life but she just fucking made you buy a fucking bottle because you want to look as fucking hot as her." -pulls AZN peace sign- but my hair is dark dark brown, cuz I'm only half asian :]

“Shut the fuck up or I’ll turn you in to the school board for sexual harassment, you fucking pedophile.”

love this chapter, didn't know that luke was a teacher, or did i just miss that? i always write stuff that i feel is better when i'm angery.

its weird that i reccommended someone that you already read, but then again there isn't much *GOOD* yaoi here. you might just become the first person that i become a loyal reveiwer to, be proud of yourself.

Wow, Luke's a teacher? How old IS this guy, who is attempting to hit on a highschool student? :D

Oh well, he's sexy either way, so its all good!

Well...I love Europe, but personally want to move there. It sucks that you had to leave! Where were you born? Where is your dad stationed at now? My mom is taking me and my friends through an EF tours thing to Paris, French Riviera, and Rome this summer, and as I've never been to Italy, I'm quite excited!

Oh, my gosh, that sounds like so much fun, squishing grapes with your feet. Eh, tourist traps are fun...I love going to the Eiffel Tower, and Westminster Abbey, and getting charicatures, and the normal tourist places, so its all good.

Well, I would agree with you on the "Arizona being hot thing"-and it is, normally, in the summer it reaches like 120 sometimes-but today when i got off work, about an hour ago, i was freezing; it was 37 degrees, and i had to walk like half a mile with no jacket, only pants and a short sleeved tee. It sucked!

Oh, yeah, through all this blabbering, I forgot:

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! *applauds* Terrific...the beginning made me laugh SO much. :D He's so hilariously random. I LOVE random people...I'm one myself. :D