Reviews for L as in TRAIN
CaFFy chapter 17 . 5/3/2008
-drool-
CaFFy chapter 16 . 5/3/2008
Aww. Lorren is so cute.
CaFFy chapter 10 . 5/3/2008
xDD Yes illegal. And your father asking to be your reader is amusing too .
Qzz chapter 23 . 4/1/2008
loved this story... so perfect with the notebook and paper thing. absolutely loved it!
Smidojuice chapter 2 . 1/14/2008
LMAO! You stapled your tests to her door? xD

thats amazing.
SkyFallOuch chapter 4 . 1/6/2008
A little late reading this story?

No, I'm wrong on that. I'm REALLY LATE on reading this.

Anyways, I like it (though it's about a year old ._.)

And I'm actually surprised that I can understand some of the Spanish on here (since I'm bad at it too.)

Love the story )
Black Wolfs Pornography chapter 8 . 11/17/2007
::grin:: 'Passion' is one of my fave yaois! have u read 'Our Kingdom'? ::shrug:: its not very showy, but the story is pretty cute.
Question Sleep chapter 22 . 10/17/2007
Aww! This was such a cute, amazing story!

I had to leave it about half way through and then go to, ya know, school and such. And of COURSE it was the day of the PSAT's, leaving me distracted throughout it and wondering what will happen when I could finally go home DX

But either way, going to start reading the sequal in a few minutes, so expect another review soon.

Speaking of that, I can't find your fake version of the story anywhere (Did you takeit off?) Because I'd love to read it...

either way, I hope to continue reading stuff by you soon!
smurf-love chapter 13 . 8/16/2007
fuck i love this stoy i just cant get enough ive ead it like 6 times and its still as good as the frist right now i have to sleep so i guess i will haveto wait till tomorrow to read the rest!*tear*
KissMyConverse chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Oh my Jesus.

Okay.

I usually don't review a story that's been going on for a while. I usually read up to the point of the last update and then review, but that time wouldn't come soon enough.

I'd just like to say how much I am in love with this story already. 'Tis quite adorable, and Lorren's little attitude problem makes me el oh el. I was also extremely overjoyed when you described Lorren's outfit; not only am I unnaturally obsessed with MCR, one of my favorite things to say is "cons". _

Alright.

This review has been quite pointles.

In conclusion, I love this story, your writing is amazing, and I will deffinitely be reading on. Kthxbye.
SaraMaxine chapter 22 . 7/30/2007
Dude!

Wow, last chappy, that snuck up on me.

It shouldn't have, but it did.

Very nice.

And tambien is also, but it might have an accent... maybe... possibly not.

Whatever.

~You get: A stingray! Because they are so very silky.~

~You also get: A sea cucumber! Because I forgot last chapter.~
SaraMaxine chapter 21 . 7/30/2007
I don't even know what I want right now!

Good thing it's already decided.

Dude, sorry about the theripist.

Shrinks and I don't really get along.

Luckily, my insanities are socially acceptable in most circles... well a few at least, the ones I'm in actually.

Eh, que será, será, ¿no?
SaraMaxine chapter 20 . 7/30/2007
Aww.

How cute!

And it works so well.

~You get: A torture chamber! I'm sure it will be useful for when the jailbait catches Juan.~
SaraMaxine chapter 19 . 7/30/2007
You know what I love about spanish?

There are two versions of the verb to be.

The temporary: Estar.

And the permanent: Ser.

I noticed Luke said he's in love in the permanent.

He is and always will be.

I love that little diference.

~You get: A sexy latino lover boy/girl! Because their worth it... usually.~
SaraMaxine chapter 18 . 7/30/2007
Aw, poor platipi.

Okay.

Can't wait for his screw-you-all-I'm-eighteen! Birthday.

You get: My favorite fortune cookie fortune! It says: Warning: Do not eat your fortune.~
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