Reviews for L as in TRAIN |
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SaraMaxine chapter 17 . 7/30/2007 I thought it was good. If nothing else, it's progress. ~You get: Empty egg cartons and velvet drapes! Yay soundproofing.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 16 . 7/30/2007 That was one deep cliffie. ~You get: A Coin-operated boy! Because I'm listening to the Dresden Dolls.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 15 . 7/30/2007 Sweet! Seseme street! I wish we could watch that in spanish class. Congrats on Spanish II. ~You get leftover pasta! Don't diss it, it comes with cheesy garlic bread.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 12 . 7/30/2007 Sweet ~You get: An Anti-Flag CD! Because they want to douse themselves in gasoline.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 11 . 7/30/2007 Fun little monolougue. But my angsty senses are tingling! Make it stop! Sorry, I gag on angsty overdose, so I always worry when I think there's even the slightest chance of it coming. ~You get: BRASS KNUCKLES! The quickest way to make a homophobic hick REPENT!~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 10 . 7/30/2007 Yipes! Scary parental attack! Please don't ever get kicked off. Cause then I wouldn't have any cute-crying-emo-jailbait to read about! ~You get: A secret compartment! Because everyone needs a place to hide yaoi manga.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 9 . 7/30/2007 Okay. That was short. But the Uranus thing made me hink of our substitute Biology teacher. He kept saying orgasm instead of organism. I don't think he knew why we were laughing. ~You get: 20 orgasms! NO! I meant organisms! RLY. SRSLY.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 8 . 7/30/2007 NICE! w00t, Passion. Although Jazz and Golden Cain are higher on the favorites list. ~You get: One dumptruck full of yaoi! Consider it ammo.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 7 . 7/30/2007 I'm back! Okay, good little chappy. Love and huggles. ~You get: A box of strawberry pocky! Beacause that last bit earned it.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 6 . 7/30/2007 That was short. I'll finish tomorrow. 17 to 23 isn't to bad of an age-gap. Nice work. ~You get: A hole in the head! Because everyone would rather have a hole in the head.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 5 . 7/30/2007 Cute plot twist. I remember that principal vs. principle thing from elementary school too! I didn't think anyone else really would though. ~You get: one half of a paper mache (sp?) car!~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 4 . 7/29/2007 Not too bad. They've both got a little additude. Odd little story with the trash bag. ~You get: A pillow! You must have been sleepy.~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 3 . 7/29/2007 Cutesy. Hope you pased Spanish II, it really is the worst year. It eases up a bit in year I. ~You get a quote! My own business bores me to death; I prefer other people's. - Oscar Wilde~ |
SaraMaxine chapter 2 . 7/29/2007 Okay, the first chappy had me a little worried that it was going to be a mega stereotype story. But the second chapter seems much more interesting. Which is understandable because of the introductions in the first. Onward! ~You get a... club! Why? Because I like them better than hearts.~ |
Silver Edged Fantasy chapter 22 . 7/16/2007 I loved this story and am definetly going on to the sequel. Lorren was the best and I'm glad they made up. |