Reviews for L as in TRAIN
SaraMaxine chapter 17 . 7/30/2007
I thought it was good.

If nothing else, it's progress.

~You get: Empty egg cartons and velvet drapes! Yay soundproofing.~
SaraMaxine chapter 16 . 7/30/2007
That was one deep cliffie.

~You get: A Coin-operated boy! Because I'm listening to the Dresden Dolls.~
SaraMaxine chapter 15 . 7/30/2007
Sweet!

Seseme street!

I wish we could watch that in spanish class.

Congrats on Spanish II.

~You get leftover pasta! Don't diss it, it comes with cheesy garlic bread.~
SaraMaxine chapter 12 . 7/30/2007
Sweet

~You get: An Anti-Flag CD! Because they want to douse themselves in gasoline.~
SaraMaxine chapter 11 . 7/30/2007
Fun little monolougue.

But my angsty senses are tingling!

Make it stop!

Sorry, I gag on angsty overdose, so I always worry when I think there's even the slightest chance of it coming.

~You get: BRASS KNUCKLES! The quickest way to make a homophobic hick REPENT!~
SaraMaxine chapter 10 . 7/30/2007
Yipes!

Scary parental attack!

Please don't ever get kicked off.

Cause then I wouldn't have any cute-crying-emo-jailbait to read about!

~You get: A secret compartment! Because everyone needs a place to hide yaoi manga.~
SaraMaxine chapter 9 . 7/30/2007
Okay.

That was short.

But the Uranus thing made me hink of our substitute Biology teacher.

He kept saying orgasm instead of organism.

I don't think he knew why we were laughing.

~You get: 20 orgasms! NO! I meant organisms! RLY. SRSLY.~
SaraMaxine chapter 8 . 7/30/2007
NICE!

w00t, Passion.

Although Jazz and Golden Cain are higher on the favorites list.

~You get: One dumptruck full of yaoi! Consider it ammo.~
SaraMaxine chapter 7 . 7/30/2007
I'm back!

Okay, good little chappy.

Love and huggles.

~You get: A box of strawberry pocky! Beacause that last bit earned it.~
SaraMaxine chapter 6 . 7/30/2007
That was short.

I'll finish tomorrow.

17 to 23 isn't to bad of an age-gap.

Nice work.

~You get: A hole in the head! Because everyone would rather have a hole in the head.~
SaraMaxine chapter 5 . 7/30/2007
Cute plot twist.

I remember that principal vs. principle thing from elementary school too!

I didn't think anyone else really would though.

~You get: one half of a paper mache (sp?) car!~
SaraMaxine chapter 4 . 7/29/2007
Not too bad.

They've both got a little additude.

Odd little story with the trash bag.

~You get: A pillow! You must have been sleepy.~
SaraMaxine chapter 3 . 7/29/2007
Cutesy.

Hope you pased Spanish II, it really is the worst year.

It eases up a bit in year I.

~You get a quote! My own business bores me to death; I prefer other people's. - Oscar Wilde~
SaraMaxine chapter 2 . 7/29/2007
Okay, the first chappy had me a little worried that it was going to be a mega stereotype story.

But the second chapter seems much more interesting.

Which is understandable because of the introductions in the first.

Onward!

~You get a... club! Why? Because I like them better than hearts.~
Silver Edged Fantasy chapter 22 . 7/16/2007
I loved this story and am definetly going on to the sequel. Lorren was the best and I'm glad they made up.
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