AH! NO! _ Oh man I am freaking SPAZZING out here. Oh man oh man.. Why did Lorren have to see? WHY?

Ok.. Hooray for Jesse coming back! :D WOO!

Okies about the pictures. Yay. And aw about teh delay-ness of teh book. Valentines Day would have been perfect haha. But April Fool's Day works too. Woo~.

Now off to the next chapter before I have a huge spazz attack!

WHOA. Emo chapter x3 "“Let go of me, first,” he whispered and I could hear tears choking his voice. I opened my eyes in surprise and looked at him. I was clinging so desperately to his shirt that you would think it was a life preserver." That was the best line ]

;-; Aw this is ending really soon -sniff-

oh! loved it *gives drum roll* can't wait for the next chappy!

Chrys

p.s this was formally Sunshine Knight.

aghsfauf. god. i read an update on another story, it made me cry. i read this, i cry harder. all of my favorite characters are emo. D: and 17.. hmm. i like the "i love you, i hate you" thing. i remember going through that. you say i hate you, but you could never mean it. aww. lorren D: *cries*

tuesday! yes! actually, i'm working on it right now... i took the day off of school. :]

ah *Sniffle* how did I miss that little orange flag saying you updated? ...stupid computer.

Luke deserves a good slap even if he did have good intentions. Porr Lorren. I like the title X as in Kiss best but my opinion.

wah! Didn't see that coming :)

got laid. :)

A good update! Everything must work out, I never liked sad ending that much since most of the stories I read are sad I want a good happy ending to make up for the sad parts! Anyway it's sad its almost over, but there will be a sequal so it's all good!

About the title if you haven't decided I think it should be U as in Turn becuase it seems to go with the title for this one.

I only realised ysterday... I'm so thick.

I don't like myself :( because all my love goes to all my awesomated friend people i know out in the *real* world. (I only just realised it existed...) and they deserve my love more than I do.

Awesome chapters - so much love and hate and emotions and things that I like! (except love...) But its overly-awesome and needs to be finished.

(I think X as in KISS)

Jeni.

hahahaa it'f ine dont worry. Buut anyway, what an intense chapter, i loevd the end with all teh mixed emptions. I hope it doens't get worse...

awesome chapter, and if we could review more than once on a chapter, then i would. heehee

OMG! Luke slept with Juan... How could he do THAT! You will not ruin anything between Luke and Lorren right? Things will get better? God, it have too! They are just so cute together! Do not break them up! If you did, you would make me cry... Seriously...

And the sequel... Well, I liked all the titles... And I want it to be about Luke and Lorren, because they ARE the characters I connect with such a title..._~ But I don't want this story to have a sad ending! I want them to be happy! And then get some problems in the sequel, and end up happy again!_~ Happy is the BEST! And they deserve it, right?_~

And as for the PDF file... I think you can dowload a document in the dimensions you need... I did that on where I fixed my book... And then I just copied my text into that doucment... Then everything got perfect! I got my book today, and it looked awesome!_~ You will find such a document in the FAQ section somewhere... I think... I have an account on cafepress, but I haven't gotten any books up there... I never found out how... The books never showed up, but all the other things I could make did... It's weird... I hope you find it!

And I will buy all the books you publish! I collect books, and even though I've read the story for free somewhere, I will buy the book if the story was good!_~ And your stories are always good, so yeah!_~ I can't wait till they get published!_~

Oh, a sequel? That's awesome!_ And I loved this chappy!_~ I was a little afraid at first that things would go to hell, but then they was in the apartment and it was oh-so-cute!_~ And you have uploaded a new chapter, so now I'm going straight over there!_~

sequel! wot! did you get my mail? XD