awe... * cries for lorren* *points finger at luke* , u ruined it u fool u CHEATER!

lmao im such a dork but i love your storys

hsiuofhsaofas. AH. what the hell D: i was just hoping juan didn't exist anymore. : poor lorren. i love him dearly. and stupid, horny luke... but i sympathize. the new chapter is written in my notebook, i haven't had time to type it. new semester, class switches, stressing out like crazy. i will update by TUESDAY. if i don't... you should like, kill me or something.

I don't hate you. Actually, i love you, because this was something that NO ONE expected, and was absolutely bloody AMAZING. Seriously. Though with every fibre in my being, i DESPERATELY want to distatch Luke from what seem to be his most-used body parts. *Snickers* Truly genius, though, and i commend you! Freaking awesome. I don't know how you came up with something like that; or the whole "penis fly trap" thing...its brilliant, i must tell you! going to read your other story now!

dreamerdoll

D: CLIFFY. I always love how you constantly use my favourite language [other than english] in this story. More interesting.

O...zotz sound good.

Anyway..

I hope Lorren moves in with Luke! That'd be so awsome.

I can't wait to read more!

~Opal

Whoa. Is he gonna stay with him? Love it.

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA! This is making me laugh stupidly XD and I almost immediately read this when I got the email O.O;

But we I can see that it is coming to an end... but when? I hope that this next chappie will come soon cause I am going HYSTERICAL ~.~;

Shindo

Nyu

it wasn't literal sense. it was joking around as in like you had a chapter of Lorren getting his mind blown and you know, Luke was sucking him off. Okay, I realized I made a bad pun. I am sorry lol

awesome chapter. (you can be so dense)

you're getting to the end? huh? why tgis is god

and fun!

Oh... ok. Sounds yummeh. :3

Moveinmoveinmovein. o_o! Haha.. and I want Jesse to come back. T.T I miss him. And damn it.. now I want a massage. D:

And oh yay! I wanna see teh pictures. Pwease?

*tries to explain her fetish with Germanic languages and fails utterly* I don't know what it is about Russian or just languages that are slightly gutteral. I guess its a matter of personal opinion. I also like English that is slightly accented because America has wiped out all traces of the accent I once had. I got assimilated *sobs*

I love the analogy with the filler paper and notebook. It makes so much sense and I am not sure after the sex scene if Luke grasped the importance of what Lorren was telling him (but the sex scene was hot so the fangirl in my is running around in circles making whimpering noises).

Luke's father. I hope he died a slow and painful death and then some maggots ate his balls. I am a very vindictive person.

I am always worried about my stories because they have a tendency to die after the first chapter (especially after I post it). From now on I am going to finish the story before putting it up but only because I write 1-3 chapters. With a story the size of yours, I think you are doing a great job at updating it and keeping the plot moving.

Rimming creeps me out. Makes me want to hide everytime I hear it, see it, read it, blah blah blah. I'm not sure why.

I've just realised that when I reviewed this story the first time I asked you to review your story instead of update it...

I'm kinda thick. :)

I really, really, really love this story.

Even more than *gasp* myself! That's not hard since I don't like myself much...

But yes I do, love this story.

So updateles! (not reviewles...)

Without the -les.

x-Jeni-x

LOVED IT! update soon

Chrys

haha... i must add that the cover of your book sounds awesome! but it should be a photo, as it would look SO cool. :D good luck with it!

dreamerdoll