|Reviews for Crystal Mermaids|
| MaskedNightingale chapter 5 . 10/26/2010
This would make a great romantic comedy film, all the right elements. Good work!
| Lorana chapter 7 . 3/6/2010
I really have enjoyed your story and do hope you will eventually continue with it.
| quotata chapter 7 . 10/11/2009
wow.. a great story. I'm glad that I didn't bypass this story. So curious about the next chapter and the explanations it'll hold.
| vasogoma chapter 7 . 9/20/2009
I love your story! :D it's so awesome! I can't wait for next one.
| Rosey-Blue chapter 7 . 6/22/2009
the detective asking her questions was my favorite part...actually the whole hospital scene was great.
i'm looking forward to more scenes with Allyne's father in them.
| ZidaPax chapter 7 . 6/8/2009
I love the hospital scene. :D
Allyne's dad is really intense, huh? lol
Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
| chng234 chapter 7 . 6/8/2009
i have a feeling that the 3 guys were sent by trenton. i hope ally's father can do something about it. i believe marcus will be able to protect ally
| ZidaPax chapter 6 . 5/27/2009
Wow. I really love this story. I hope you update soon, and I hope this will be a complete story unlike others which are left hanging. Great story. :)
| chng234 chapter 6 . 5/26/2009
kinda feel sad for allyne... trenton must have hurt her deeply... i wonder does marcus like her because he wan to "heal" her or see her as a challenge
| Fayre Meira chapter 6 . 5/26/2009
am. so. totally. in. love. very. hehe. awesome update!
| mariRocks chapter 6 . 5/26/2009
| Pione chapter 6 . 5/17/2008
I adore your story! :)
| FM Radio chapter 6 . 10/21/2007
IT DOES NOT LOOK LIKE CRAP! Your struggle does not show at all, this chapter is as awesome as the others, if not more! :) Update soon!
| laDauphine chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
This is going to be a good one, I just know it! :) Well done you.
| Silveralsa chapter 6 . 8/27/2007
The flopping fish was funny... I actually like to sail myself, and while I have a completely different writing style, it'd be nice to have more details of the "feeling" of sailing. More of the rocking of the boat, the smell, etc. But I'm just a sensory person :) If you have time, would like to know what you think of either my stories, "This Adventure Called Love..." or "Karate...". Update soon!