Reviews for Touch and go: All I Want
imsorandom chapter 13 . 6/22/2007
wow. seriously, that was amazing..even though you left us hanging there! i'm glad the alex/brad chapter is closed (it is, isn't it?) and the party crashin' thing was pretty amusing...i feel sad for sarah though...wonder what she'll make of everything...okay, can't wait for book 2!
imsorandom chapter 12 . 6/22/2007
i cant believe i didnt notice u updated! this chapter was...shocking. seriously...alex...brad...jennifer...ISABELLA!...god, who would've guessed! cant wait to read the epilogue -)
imsorandom chapter 11 . 6/13/2007
beautiful chapter...but i cant believe u left us hanging like that!
imsorandom chapter 10 . 6/8/2007
i liked alex and brad, their awkwardness and retorts were as amusing as always. and woah, sarah finally has a plot other than the drifting-away-from-jennifer-and-crowd thing! i wonder who she'll choose...dave or scott...personally i think she's better off with scott as especially during the car scene in one of the previous chapters, it felt like they were really meant to be. im still against dave and sarah OR dave and marissa. dave needs someone who'll make his life more interesting. by the way, i couldn't help noticing, what happened to leonard? after a mention of him in the first and second chapter and a small mention of him somewhere after that he was just...gone. it would be great it he came back again, as i really think alex and leonard would be great together, as amusing as alex and brad are together. speaking of brad...who does he really love? alex or jennifer? i cant wait for more.
imsorandom chapter 9 . 6/8/2007
i think alex is by far the most well developed character. she has slowly grown through the story and it's nice how she's finally accepting herself as she is and it was also nice that she was nice to morgana. maybe they could be friends. another part on morgana which i adored, i wonder who mrgndv is...
imsorandom chapter 8 . 6/8/2007
wow, i actually feel sorry for morgana. you showed the school bitch in a totally different angle that made me feel sorry for her. yup, marissa was definitely a bitch to alex but it wasn't out of character...the six of them felt really close, what with justin's flirting-cum-laughing, brad's teasing (aww...poor alex), dave's silence, marissa's bitchiness, sarah...was she even there? and jennifer's usual watch-but-never-participate policy. i loved how despite the fact that they are all rich and glamorous their personalities totally differ and they are portrayed realistically.
imsorandom chapter 7 . 6/8/2007
okay, this chapter is definitely my favorite! it flowed really well with minimal but neccessary description and dialogue that flowed effortlessly. i liked the way jennifer's feelings towards brad wasn't overdone and dave and marissa seemed to sound really casual and friendly around each other, i'm ALSO glad that they seem to be nothing more than really good friends and marissa even pestered him about sarah (what was with that, btw? dave and sarah...? i guess that's better than marissa and dave but still...)making him really uncomfortable. however nothing could beat the alex/brad convo, i could really feel the awkwardness and tension and i'm really starting to like know, as a couple...things are getting interesting, can't wait to read more.
imsorandom chapter 6 . 6/8/2007
at first i thought this chap lacked the description n emotion the last chapter was filled with but i couldn't not like this chapter for long...the last part completely drew me in, as i could totally get what/how alex felt. and the end...woah...i totally didn't expect the tutor to be brad!
imsorandom chapter 5 . 6/8/2007
this was definitely one of the most well-written chaps of the story. i could feel how alex and jennifer felt, and totally relate to everything. except for the overuse of commas at the start and the fact that you spelt 'weird' as 'wierd' there wasn't any major errors. i can't wait to read the next chap!
imsorandom chapter 4 . 6/8/2007
i'm glad u included a part on morgana, it makes us understand her more. yay, more jennifer and brad stuff! are dave and marissa going to get together though? i don't know why but...i don't really like dave/marissa together. they're just
imsorandom chapter 3 . 6/8/2007
i like the whole clique war thing, it spices up everything...i think i've figured out who i like and who i dont as wel! jennifer's pretty okay, marissa's awesome (gotta love bitches!), sarah...i don't really like idea why, i LOVE justin though...he's hott!
imsorandom chapter 2 . 6/8/2007
it took awhile for me to get back to reading this but i'm glad i the tension between brad and jennifer AND the alex and leonard convo. they would be cute together!
imsorandom chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
i like this! it's light-hearted and unique in its own way. i havent finished reading all the chapters but will get to it soon.
anon chapter 6 . 5/2/2007
gotta love alex
kellyr chapter 7 . 5/2/2007
marissa and dave r so cute!
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