Excellent story so far. I like it a lot. It's dramatic but light-hearted at times as well, which makes it a refreshing read. Can't wait for more.

~carm~

Gosh, I finally, finally got a chance to read this update. Well it seems to distract from the original subject that you started with, I guess it has to do with it only being the second chapter. For more oppinion I guess I'll have to read more, so please update soon.

~Bob Evans

Again very nice, although I liked the first chapter a lot better than this one only because your wrote about a lot of raw emotion the main character was going through. Not so much of that in this one but still good.

I pity Greg for being the main character... that's a lot of responsibility. Living everyone else's problems through your life.

Remember when being young and in love was a good thing?

Are you going to continue this, or was it a one-shot? Either way, kinda cynical ending. Story was well written, but...man, just one of those plots...

Wow...this story was AmAzInG! I'm not gunna lie. This is definitely something that I usually don't read but I'm glad I did. Excellent work.