Reviews for Cross Me
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I love the karma line and the ending... its well done...
Ice and Snow chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
you sound tense. wink ] lovely as usual. different. nice.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Wow...the power just pours of the poem. It's a beautiful piece and really well written. Expressed really well too.

Great work.

queenvixta
lackluster chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
"Cross me - I dare you" the violence is there. i love the little glimpses. such anger. and yet it's almost relaxed. love it.
animegirl777 chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Oh my Budha. I love that poem. I think that maybe my new favorite. I love how you allude to so much violence and it of your words. It rocks. I shall print it out and cherish it 4evr!
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
I like it. Very intense words and feeling throughout. I really don't think you should change anything, so I have nothing to suggest. Great job!