Reviews for Taihaku
yoda1k chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
i thought it was a good story. it's interesting and something i haven't really heard of before. kinda short, but hey, it's just the first chapter. hope you update soon!
Tyanna chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
Very intresting. I quite enjoyed it :)

There are a few spelling mistakes, but nothing serious. It is very well thought out, giving just enough to entice the reader to keep reading. A great first chapter. I can't wait to read the next one :)