|Reviews for The Legend of the Shadow|
| Itzmi chapter 10 . 7/23/2011
Everything was amazing done and well-written. The flow of the story, the complex characters, the small beggings, the wonderful endings - I loved them all.
The way you deal with killing - it was very realistic. The reactions, the emotions...
| a99515 chapter 10 . 2/5/2010
not what you would expect worth your time reading this hero has searies all over it
| ZeektheBard chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Finally found enough time to read this.
Anyways, the beginning was good: nicely written and giving the reader a visual on the happenings. The setting seems interesting and I'm intrigued as to how the plot will proceeded.
Overall it's a good start and I sense this story is going to be a good one, though short (apperently).
I'll read some more in the near future, when I'll have a bit more time.
| J.M.Collins chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
hey, I like. I like muchos. Not many poeple go for the post-apocalyptic scenarios in their storys :P
this is the first story where ive been this surprised so early on in the story for a long time. keep it up.
having said that, i do have a few criticisms. your writing is too flowery (at least for me), like when you were narrating the part with the baby crying for the first time, the bit about he was letting the world know he was born didnt really need to be there. it would have had the same effect without it, see? cos, you see, we (readers) arent idiots :P
anyway, I will read the rest of your story soon!
btw, you reviewed my story Mechanoid Five, but i couldnt be arsed to sign in :P (i know i cant really talk about bad writing with Mech 5 up but i try to make my criticisms as constructive as possible)
| Iccle Fairy chapter 10 . 10/7/2007
fantastic story! i've seen that you've written a sequel so i will be definately reading that! really fantastic, you've put thought into the characters and plot and it really shows! i love your writing style! fran ~*~
| Iccle Fairy chapter 9 . 10/7/2007
oh dear, thats not good, amazing fight scene! well done!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 8 . 10/7/2007
fab chapter! very exciting and intriguing!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 7 . 10/7/2007
that last bit was very well written, very moving! this is really great!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 6 . 10/7/2007
very good chapter! can't wait to see what he does next!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 5 . 10/7/2007
oh yey! Kiko's back! i like the communication by noises again in this story!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 4 . 10/7/2007
oh maybe he doesn't give me the creeps any more! liking the inclusion of the blades on the arms! liked those before as well!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 3 . 10/7/2007
very good, that guy gives me the creeps though!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 2 . 10/7/2007
wow that was very well written! better not be all dead though!
| Iccle Fairy chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
oh wow wonderful first chapter. great descriptions at the beginning! really enjoyable and intriguing! gonna keep reading! fran ~*~
| Dysthymia chapter 10 . 4/28/2007
I like what I've seen. Keep writing. I think that you have a potential writing career in the works.