|Reviews for The House of Ill Repute|
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
The last two lines were amazing. The imagry is very vivid and I can picture it well, thou I'm not much a major in vocabulary '... Great work thou!
| Ann chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
It's haunting...it's gothically written. It's something I would find in a Dean Koontz novel. Well done!
| S. Ben Beach chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
ohh man, reading that even in daylight (10am) scared me.
I really like the 3rd stanza:
"And daylight is lost in the lavender sails
As gained and growing from tempest wind"
that is incredible. Took me a while to get it (10am also means that I just got up .
| Randomisation chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Their faces dangle like chandeliers
-that is some great imagery
loves and lovely
| Circus chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
I love it! Beautiful, yet coarse, and unrefined even with the beautiful wording. You always know the right words to use to evoke the correct emotion for an image. Very neat. Gorgeously done.
| volopurus chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
How do you come up with these?
| EnigmaticArsenic chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
This is very befitting October- something haunting but harmless. Kinda like a breath of wind caught amongst dead leaves.
But anyhow, might I say- WOW! you've been very prolific lately. (Keep it up! lol)
| Inkspilled chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
At the beginning the rhyming is working, then near the end you stop. It sort of unbalances it. But other than that most of it's good. But I don't see how faces can dangle...*scary thoughts* XD.