|Reviews for The Wolf and the Lamb|
| WickedCityy chapter 21 . 6/7/2021
Hello! I don't usually write reviews/comments, but I've been trying to get better at that, so here goes I guess:
I don't really know what I expected when I started reading this fic. Honestly, I think I read the "slash/shota/furry" warning at the start of the summary, thought "huh, this might be weird" and started it for... shits and giggles, I suppose?
Either way, I'm glad I did! It's obvious that you put a lot of care into the worldbuilding of this story and evolving the story and characters beyond just the central pair. I'm not crazy about stories where the romance between two characters is the biggest available plot, so I enjoyed the myriad subplots you wove in here. It was also nice seeing another interpretation of how a society of furries might work. As a furry myself, I and many furry creators tend to gloss over deeper societal implications in favor of whatever story we're trying to worldbuild, so stories that focus on those aspects are rarer and tend to feel more fresh and unique.
All in all, thanks for writing this! It was a very fun read.
| okami.takishima chapter 16 . 5/6/2019
I like how you had pee-head's (never gonna let that go XD) thoughts mirror Tristan's at the start of the fic! :)
Oh and bringing back "cute as a bug's ear" from what, their third interaction? Absolute genius.
| okami.takishima chapter 9 . 5/3/2019
I found it interesting that Gordon called Tay a "boy-wolf" instead of a "wolf-boy" at the end of this chapter. Is there a special reason for that, like maybe another sign that he's starting to respect him more or something, or is it just a typo?
| okami.takishima chapter 6 . 5/1/2019
You said "aside" twice, in regard to Tristan's sword anxiety. Great fic aside from a few typos tho!
| Sol chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
So...I am writing this at 4am where I am at, so please don't judge me on grammar and such, heh. I think the last time I wrote a review on here I was in middle school, or maybe freshman year of highschool. It's been a long time...it's been a interesting life. But this story, its changed my thinking. It changed my likes and dislikes. It changed quite a few things and actually made me continue in art and my education when I thought that I could not stand it any longer. It was a bright point in a otherwise darker time. And being able to look back on that is a little crazy. Anyway, the writing may not be the best that I have read, at least grammar wise and prose. But it's the feeling the spine tingling emotion that runs through you making you want to continue, the pacing, the descriptions, the plot and characters, how well they grow and become fleshed out in such a short amount of time. The ending, few and far between at there such tear jerking beautiful endings as this unless published. Your story encaptured me when I was younger and still does now. I want with all my heart to make a comic or at least draw the book, maybe commission someone to do so. This story feels the need to be told and I only wish I could help spread it. If someone already has and I could never find it I would love to know, but with your permission and perhaps guidance I would like to start on this or at least try and get it commissioned. I love this story, and I hope you will allow me to work with it as well as you. Thank you for writing, I hope this message finds you in good health.
Ps- my email is this, sorry I don't have an account. Hope to hear from you soon.
| Jewbaca chapter 10 . 4/22/2017
Wolves are still like 40 times stronger than a rabbit
| Jewbaca chapter 3 . 4/22/2017
WHY Does THIS SHIT HAVE TO BE GAY! :(
| apolomenace chapter 21 . 11/22/2015
A really good story i must say.
| Insanity Fuels My Imagination chapter 21 . 7/22/2015
This is a work of imaginative genius. There's really not much else to say. I love the world, storyline, characters, and writing style. The internet (and physical world) needs more stories as creative and lovely as this one.
| Everfew chapter 3 . 6/17/2015
Aww, so cute.
| angela marie chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
talk about princesess stories hahaha
| freak-joy-spastic chapter 21 . 7/19/2013
Magnificent, wonderful, a great read indeed! I absolutely couldn't put it down. It started off so simple but evolved into seething much more. I wish finding more stories like this wasn't so hard.
| DrYuriMom chapter 9 . 11/2/2012
Better n' better. I must admit I do love how the plot is developing. It's so natural and things slowly escalate. The relationship between Tris and Tay is so sweet now. I don't often care about characters like I do them. I'm still having a blast with this. I'm at odds eager for more and dreading it being over.
| DrYuriMom chapter 5 . 10/31/2012
Okay, of COURSE the next chapter clearly answered the question I had. I think I'll just shut up and read now. I'm noting the dialog isn't as well developed as your earlier 'Girl for Me'. Still, the creative story more than makes up for it. I'm already caring for the two boys. We'll see about these others.
| DrYuriMom chapter 4 . 10/31/2012
Getting more and more interesting. I must admit my brain is hurting trying to reason out things I should just be riding with, like what Tristan has been eating back in Town if he hasn't been taking down prey in a while. I s'pose they may have prepared food in Town. Anyway I know that's not the point. The uniqueness of the story has earned you an enormous amount of suspension if disbelief on my part. On to the next chapter!