hehe took me for ever to read this, damn things to do.

I found the part about the teeth adorable. This story is so 'cute'

wow I missed so many chps of this! I thought Ihad you on authors alerts, guess not.

their interaction was so adorable and taylor sounds soo cute. It made me pout a bit when he said his mom wouldn't be surprised to see him alive.

Then talking about how they both don't really fit in their "insert word" it was very endearing.

well, i'm having difficulty imagining the characters but the story is easy to follow. (laughs) i enjoyed reading this. i wonder why there's only a few reviews? this story is after all, amazingly unique. something refreshing to read from all those teen angst populating fictionpress. hugs you.

I read it.

I didn't realize you were going to update it since it said one-shot, but I have read it.

I like the goat(ess?) and her clothes.

Taylor is adorable. Undeniably.

It's good to know they have a place to run to at least.

And, by the way, if he's 11 and he's done the naughty (I'm such a child) already with people other than Tristan, wow. Now THAT my friend is shota at it's best.

It's a cute story though. Very...cuddly? I believe cuddly applies. We're talking about animals afterall, right?

I like it. I must. I kept reading even after the yiffing. That says something, really it does.

Bunny...in...leather pants... oh the image is so funny. He's a mean bunny too, by the sounds of it. Sassy in leather, haha.

*claps hands* Yay! They'll get to be together!

I know what's gonna happen! YAY!

this story is... oddly cute and lovely. very original concept as well.

What will happen when they see each other again?

O.O ... *gigglefest* Wow. This is awesome. XD

So despite knowing I would cringe, I completely had to read it anyways.

Curiousity is a character flaw, haha.

Well, hm, It found it written all right. It's short so I don't really have an intense opinion on it.

Despite the sex, I liked the story line, except that you were more detailed in one paragraph and then suddenly just throw it "Tristan wasn't moving. Tristan had an erection. Tristan fucked him."

You broke from more detailed sentences to something that seemed so disconnected from the rest that it became like "Sally saw Jill. Jilly smiled. Sally waved."

However, as far as the rest of the story goes, I liked it. The sex wasn't bad, the incorporation of why sheep boy doesn't die, etc, I liked. Just those 3 sentences sounded off.

I liked it though, bizarre as that may sound after the critique.

I mean, it's good to say things simple in stories as well as elaborate, but the three one after the other were weird given as you had nice pretty long sentences before that.

cute. and interesting, diffrent worlds and all. wouldn't mind reading if you decide to continue this.

oh the wolf has a problem doesn't he?

"The boy wasn't goig to be telling anyone what had happened form inside Tristan's stomach.,"

I was like he still going to eat him! I really would have hate to see the lamb be eaten after sex.

That was a very cool and surreal story.