Reviews for What Pictures Never Show
Ambeeka chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
wow i really really like this! you're really good )
Loud Silence chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
This is a really good poem. It's got great rhythm and I can feel what you're saying in the poem. I like it.
High Sky chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
the rhythem here is perfect, and like how the poem is themed. good work.
The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
Wow, this is great. The third stanza was a little rough; it had more syllables per line than the other stanza, and that made it not fit in as well with the others.

I love the final lines "And I bet you didn't notice/ because the pictures never show." The whole poem is very touching, but those lines really bring it all together and make it great.
GirlxAnachronism chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
amazing! I loved how the poem was in this telling you kind of tone but the bold letters were the anger, and frustration. At least thats how i saw it. I loved it
dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
man, is it just me or are people getting better at their writing? this is the fourth piece that i've read that blew me away. it's rather short but i don't care at the moment. i can relate beautifully to this. and maybe this is why i hate taking pictures.
R. Louise chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
I love this because I can sort of relate.

And I love it because it's genuinely amazing.