Reviews for Solidarity KHST challenge 2
LafilledeShakespeare chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Great story, I believe. The best bit was the debate/philosophical part, with a cynic's remarks and philosopher's ones. Nick is just so cynical it blocks out deeper sense to get into his head. Honey, Life's illogical, even love's illogical, and probably the greatest stupidity a man can ever commit, but hey we still do it, yeah? Why's he so touchy? That's what I'm about to find out.I find this very interesting.
Matt Lopez chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
The dialogue was great. Still, there is great similarity, inevitable I know, between all the characters that you write. I would love to see a vast contrast between personalities and characters, like real life. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Wess Root chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
This short story was very different from the last one. I liked it, it delt with issues that are very important and need to be addressed. A lot of people like Neil are affraid to talk about their beliefs in the after life. I thought it was tacktful and interesting. Good job, you show great potential in different writing styles.