Reviews for When Pigs FLy
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
i guess this is a cool poem.

it at least has a really nice rhythm behind it.

maybe i just don't really like the transition with "despite"

it's still a pretty good poem.

respects, -ty.
emmytasticgal chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
WOWZA! this is incredible...totally enjoyable to read. I love how you maintain such an awesome rhythm and the thing about Harper's face LOL. so right. Gorgeous images... simply gorgeous. keep up the awesomeness...
cassidy00 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I remember when you first wrote this. You sent it to me for an opinion. It's still as good as I first thought it was.
Moosher chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Nice build up, it flows well and its thought provoking, but the ending was a bit dissappointing.. I wasn't expecting it .. it wasn't personal..it was sort of vague and general.. But you've got a major talent. Keep up the good work.

-Moosher
sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
This is really good. The examples you give get your point across powerfully in the end. Good job!

Falcon