Reviews for Violet
ivyfurl chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
This made me want to go to Maui.

And it was twice as beautiful as said island.

-Abby
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
It's pretty cool how you can make a whole poem about a single color. It really shows skill. As simple as a sunset can be, you illustrate it very well, light personification and all. I did find the first few lines to be a bit weaker than the other lines, but you made up the rest of them well by introducing words like "velvet," "dusky," and "amethyst."

It doesn't do a ton new, at least when it comes to the actual event, but you illustrate the whole work with some serious strength and ability. Keep up the great work.
Boooklover chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Ooh, preddy colours! *is mesmerised*. Fantastic, I can imagine that beautiful sight.
Poet Bucky chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
I like the image. the storm clouds remind me of the wicked storm we had here today.

Though the line 'the colour of midnight' seems to be out of place to me. could just be me though xD.

Bucky.
Slythersnak1001 chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
I like it. It's very inspiring.