Reviews for The War to End all Wars
poopllama chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
The story was good, but seems a bit confusing. As a precursor or prologue, this would fit quite decently, but there doesn't seem to be much of a reason why there was an invasion in the first place. Also it seems unlikely that within a few minutes, the battle would already be named, and also you should put "magazines" instead of "clips" of ammo (a point which I specify more about in my forum). The events seemed a little rushed, and there isn't much description of them. You should tell more about the Senior Commander and how the assailant was executed.

The spelling could also use some brushing-up.

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She'sALady-SoTreatHerLikeOne chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
I love how this was written. Great story idea. Please update soon.
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mido chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
it is very good story ,I enjoyed a lot
blueearth77 chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
awesome! i dont really get the storyline but i love it!
Keefin chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Thats a good story lots of action i have a question could you help me with my story i'm not far but i need help it's found at Also i have a question how to you edit alredy submitted chapters. Because i would like to add and fix my chapter one.
Yachi chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
alsome story i like it yet there is some spelling errors other than that its pretty good!
Jon Lassik chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Great way to start the book, though I recommend putting a little more detail into and between the story taking place. Other than that, great job, can't wait to read more.
spyder98 chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Just a few spelling mistakes and some grammar mishaps, but other than that very interesting plot. I'm ready for the next part!


Nina Kindred chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
Very interesting beginning. I'm anxious to see where this goes.