Reviews for The Online Chat Room
multiples of six chapter 10 . 5/22/2007
I like this story ) please update soon!
Shindo Shuichi chapter 10 . 5/21/2007
A big thing is the repeated part where he talks about Lance and his gayness stuff. That is all that was really confusing other than the fact that being drunk most likely makes everythin unable to be processed properly...

Update soon.
Half-BloodGrlPirate chapter 10 . 5/21/2007
YAY! ONION RING HAS UPDATED! LOL! I LOVE THIS STORY IT SERIOUSLY ROCKS! now, if u would update more that'd b hecka helpful, i really lyk how this is goin but i want u 2 decide who Justin lyks: Talon or Lance. and i think u should let Justin talk to Talon more, cuz they need to get to kno each other, you know? 'kay, i gtg. lol BIYA!


yuzu-farewell chapter 10 . 5/21/2007
Ok, you have a mistake. But other than that, what the hell! He told Lance he was ready to get some? whoo!

carcrash chapter 10 . 5/21/2007
I love this story.

I really took a liking to Justin.
theultimateidiot chapter 9 . 5/9/2007
When are you updating? I like your story because it's different from other stories where the main character is usually popular or a downright loser who has only one friend. In this story's case, Justin is, I'd say he's an average self-concious guy who just happens to be gay. Interesting.

Update soon!
Envierose chapter 9 . 4/29/2007
Haha cool story so far, update!
paputsza chapter 9 . 4/26/2007
go greeks!

o.o update peas. o.o

i have an addiction.

i need to stop adding stuff to my favourites list.
UniquelyNeverSeen chapter 9 . 4/17/2007
well sounds interesting, and i'm happy for you that you were able to fend off the academic work wich was trying to rape you... that would have been quiet painfull... you know with all thoughs papercuts :D well can't wait for the next update!
yuzu-farewell chapter 9 . 4/8/2007
needs more. thats all there is to it. And is Talon and August the same guy? Probably not, but hey. Keep going. And get him together with someone soon.

Half-BloodGrlPirate chapter 9 . 4/5/2007
hey i really like this before but i stopped at 5 because it hadnt been updated. i didnt know that you'd updated until i found ur story in the romance list so i guess i forgot to review and im really sorry for that. i cant wait for this to be updated and i hope you do again soon. GREAT STORY! BIYA!


Shindo Shuichi chapter 9 . 4/4/2007
xD! He is so perv! But I like that! So when you get the time from fending off the attacks from the work, update, so we can like... read xDD So update and I, everyone, everyone will be happy!


Nyu :)
Esquirella chapter 9 . 4/4/2007
Weird party, but the candy bar game was pretty funny.
xanthofile chapter 9 . 4/4/2007
as promised, i found some free time to read! and i have to admit, the beginning of this story is a bit shaky, especially the first chapter. but i think the thing i had the most trouble floundering past was the verb tenses. that's me being all 'editorial nazi'. *laughs*

this is something different from my normal read, but it's also a completely different college scene than what i'm used to. as someone who attends a two-year community college without dorms, i don't entirely understand that aspect of this fic...which comprises quite a bit of it, no? also-i'm not one for drinking over my limit. and i don't willingly force myself into social situations.

so. my views were biased from the beginning.

but, all that aside: there is potential here for what i constitute as being 'a great fic', so i'll be keeping an eye on it for updates.

Shindo Shuichi chapter 8 . 4/1/2007
Now that I really can review... there isn't much to say but. wow... I am extremely envious and hope that you will update this soon!


67 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 .. Last Next »