|Reviews for The Online Chat Room|
| xanthofile chapter 9 . 4/4/2007
as promised, i found some free time to read! and i have to admit, the beginning of this story is a bit shaky, especially the first chapter. but i think the thing i had the most trouble floundering past was the verb tenses. that's me being all 'editorial nazi'. *laughs*
this is something different from my normal read, but it's also a completely different college scene than what i'm used to. as someone who attends a two-year community college without dorms, i don't entirely understand that aspect of this fic...which comprises quite a bit of it, no? also-i'm not one for drinking over my limit. and i don't willingly force myself into social situations.
so. my views were biased from the beginning.
but, all that aside: there is potential here for what i constitute as being 'a great fic', so i'll be keeping an eye on it for updates.
| Shindo Shuichi chapter 8 . 4/1/2007
Now that I really can review... there isn't much to say but. wow... I am extremely envious and hope that you will update this soon!
| jeshickah chapter 8 . 3/24/2007
hey i lke the story really good keep at it ok
| Esquirella chapter 8 . 3/21/2007
Is there something weird going on with Zach?
| Esquirella chapter 7 . 3/12/2007
I hope Talon resurfaces. I dunno why, but I liked that guy. August seems cool, too, though.
| yuzu-farewell chapter 3 . 3/12/2007
Ok, so i still have to read the rest, but all of a sudden its like a brick in my hands, i have to start writing chapter two for my story.
I like this, gay guys are kinda my thing.. well, for friends anyway...
| Aquarian Angel 2790 chapter 2 . 3/11/2007
haha i know a girl kinda like jessica. she almost killed me cuz i made a ring on her coffee table. i ran fast that day...
well i didnt say in my last review but im no good at constuctive critism so ill just say im interested and u've sucked me in.
| Aquarian Angel 2790 chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
well this has my attention. i wonder how this is gonna work out.
| eggsbenni221 chapter 5 . 3/11/2007
wow, a new boy. Interesting. Hope to read more soon!
| Esquirella chapter 6 . 3/7/2007
Did Justin tell Talon he sent him the wrong pic yet? (Sorry, I get confused sometimes.)
| Esquirella chapter 5 . 2/22/2007
I like this story very much!
| Jessi 'Pixie' Watson chapter 4 . 2/15/2007
i decided to be nice and review for you!
i really like so far, except for fact that he keeps getting drunk (alcohol is against my morals) but its still a good story, Talon is a very cool name.
please put more up!
| Green Eyed Pixie chapter 4 . 2/12/2007
This is a really awesome story. It seems like such a more real situation than other slash stories. I love Justin, he's a really believable and intetresting character, but i feel so sorry for him! There MUST be some other gay boys around, but i want him and Talon to work out ]. Seriously good story, hope you update soon.
| star chapter 3 . 2/8/2007
interesting story, i'll be looking forward to your next chapter _
| eggsbenni221 chapter 3 . 2/2/2007
Aww, don't give up. The reviews will come around. Meanwhile, definitely keep writing! I want to see more of that guy Justin talked to in the chatroom. Damn, what was him name? Can't remember. They need to run into each other just randomly, or...I don't know, but the meeting between them should be completely beyond normal. Don't listen to me though. It's your story.
P.S thanks for checking out my stuff. I saw your review, and it made me smile.