But that means no India! And we all love India.

But if that means more of Alex's extremely annoying friends ... )

I adore the re-write already, and dont mind the fact its being re-written at all because youre keeping the old one up and with the changes its like a whole new story. Because of the changes unlike most re-writes its keeping my attention beacause i dont know exactly whats going to happen. Cant wait for an update ]

mandii

I think Adrian and Jason's relationship dominated this chapter, and it played out really well. As for the extreme personalities, especially in Quentin, be careful that they remain realistic. Why is Quentin such an arrogant, egotistic, vile jerk anyway?

I'm so happy that you're rewriting the story with some major changes (not that I didn't love the original version. I did). Now, not only is the story back, but I also get to see how Adrian's going to adjust to Alex's home. You've already got me hooked. Keep up the great work and update soon! )

Yeah, I can totally see the changes, yet there are still some similarities that I can point out. I like this new one. I liked the original one as well. It's a bit too early to decide how the plot is going to develop, but I'm sure it'll be good.

Anyways, take care and UPDATE SOON!

~Maha

ah man india is gone? well you better substitue with a cool japanese or greek girl or something...i like adrian better here.

is adrian a virgin in this story or like the past one she gave it to Jason? it would be more dramatic if adrian was a virgin though...hm...?

awsome job!

I wiah u luck on your writing!

A Dark Rose

p.s Meg is so AWSOME

Even though chapter 2 was mainly fluff, I still enjoyed it. I don't know why, but I like Quentin. He's so raunchy and forward that I love it. haha. Alex is once again showing his smooth self. I like it a lot better that Adrian can hold her own in the discussions with Alex. It makes for more interesting conversation. I'm really looking forward to see what happens next. I see you kept Stephanie in the picture, so I'm wondering what will happen with that. Anyway, keep writing, I'm loving this rewrite so far!

Stupid public computers..

I'm getting pretty curious.. I wonder if he'll cheat on her in this version. Or if she maybe will be the one doing the cheating.

This looks interesting )

nice chapter! though...I'm still recovering from the new characteristics you put in Alex's friends. I'm definately excited to read the chapters when she's in school. New crowd, new people. And...is Jason going to cheat on her? He seems like he would. Hahaha. I still hate him, even from the first story. He looks nicer here, and he seems like he actually cares, but the image of him from last time is still in my head.

I'm excited for your next chapter, alright? Good job here, by the way! :D

hm...alex seems a bit more rough, is stephanie gonna come in the story?

Wicked chapter, I loved arrogent Alex and all of his friends. I can't wait to read more.

Yes, I guess the question that I should be asking is what kind of nightmares Andrian is going to be having to go threw from going to Alex's school from now on. :) I was wondering, this version if rated T while the original was rated M. Does this mean that there will be no *ahem* suggestive themes? XD

jason cheated on her already, didn't he? i wonder how she'll find out...

this is great! another story with (most of) the characters i love! good luck with this new version! i look forward to see how the story progresses.