Reviews for Tarnished Lies
beatrice is hot chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I like your prose better than your poetry.
M. Williams chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
I liked this message, if you will, a lot to. I know someone who is precisely like the girl described in the story, and I think you did a good job of portraying someone like that.

I didn't like the end of the last sentence. It was great up until "...and chased away both, alone..." but after that, it just.. seemed weird. I might be crazy, who knows?

Good story!