|Reviews for The Healing of the Broken Valley|
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Wow, this was seriously the best I've read from you. Some of your metaphors are amazing: "the cloudy gray sky unleash its precious cargo" was my favorite.
The author's note made me smile. It seems biology class is a great place to write poems. :) I'm slightly jealous when you mention snow, though. I live in a part of the country where there is zero snow, and I mean zero.
Well, enough babbling. This poem was great, and I hope to see more like it.