Reviews for The Broken Valley
For the Kingdom chapter 2 . 4/1/2007
Wow. Wow. ...wow. Incredibly poetic and raw. There are no extra words watering down the messages in these two prayers.

Bravo, my friend, bravo.
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Wow, the whole thing kind of came rushing out at me. I'd advise putting it in paragraphs, even if it's in incomplete thoughts, just to make it appear less fearsome.

As for the prayer, the only word I can use to describe it is deep. It's wave after wave of paroxysm and emotion. Wow.