Reviews for unfinished stories
lackluster chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
the way you formatted this works quite well. gorgeous imagery, as well. it's perfect.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Oh. Meh. God.

This is just amazing. Seriously, it is.

I really love that first stanza intensely and, oh, every other line after that is really good and, oh-

Lets just say I really, really like this. A lot.

- Noelle