|Reviews for unfinished stories|
| lackluster chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
the way you formatted this works quite well. gorgeous imagery, as well. it's perfect.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Oh. Meh. God.
This is just amazing. Seriously, it is.
I really love that first stanza intensely and, oh, every other line after that is really good and, oh-
Lets just say I really, really like this. A lot.